Translation feedback post!

No flaming allowed, but constructive criticism is more than welcome! As a quick note: I would appreciate it if you gave feedback after reading my recent translations, as my translation methods have changed since my earlier works. The list of translations I've worked on can be found here. If, however, you still feel that I haven't made any improvement at all, then do let me know. Politely!

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Things you can feedback on:

-Translation accuracy: does the target language (English) largely match with the source language (Japanese)? have the nuances of the source language been sufficiently captured?

-Use of English: are translations accurate apart from occasional slips of grammar? do sentences have near perfect flow? do sentences sound nearly as normal as they would if spoken by a native speaker?

-Efficiency: are translations completed quickly?

-Interaction: not quite a translation issue, but an issue for fandom translators nonetheless. have I been polite in dealing with people? have I made an effort to respond to questions/comments?

REOPENED: MARCH 5, 2010

CLOSED

ETA: Apologies to all for such a long wait, but I'm going to close this request post again. School is getting really busy, and I'm frankly quite distracted with other things as well. I will still try a hand at finishing the requests I have at hand, but I can't make any promises. Again, I'm very sorry. m(_ _)m

Requests for Japanese-English translations go here! Before making any requests, always check this post and the translation list to see if it has already been translated.

!ATTENTION!

Requests will be on hold until all 5x10 projects have been completed. Sorry, everyone, and thank you so much for your infinite patience! m(_ _)m

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( CURRENT PROJECTS )

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These are all complete translations, if not completed parts of an article or video clip. I'm afraid I won't upload videos or images to accompany the script, so please don't request for them.

( Translation list )

Updated: March 7, 2010

All the junk I've ever written can be found here.

WARNING: BOYS LOVE, don't proceed if that's not something you like.

( Fic list )

Updated: March 10, 2011

[Title] Seoul Academy: The Ramblings of a Journalist II
[Rating] PG-13
[Disclaimer] I don't own any of the One Day boys.
[Pairings] Channuneo, Khunyoung, Jinwoon/Kwon, (Big Bang) GD/Seungri
[Notes] A Daily Seoul write-up on the New Years celebration in Seoul Academy; appearances of Big Bang members GD and Seungri included. Happy New Year, everyone!

( 2012 opens with a big bang as various student groups come together to create exciting collaborations on the main stage. )

[Title] Seoul Academy: The Ramblings of a Journalist I
[Rating] PG-13
[Disclaimer] I don't own any of the One Day boys.
[Pairings] Channuneo, Khunyoung
[Notes] Wooyoung sees a therapist, featuring all the One Day boys and Big Bang's TOP. It's been ages since I've written this verse, ahaha. Enjoy? ♥

( Hwang Chansung, star and hope of the football team, was seeing a shrink. )

[Title] Just Lee Junho
[Rating] PG-13
[Disclaimer] I don't own any of the 2PM boys.
[Pairings] Gen, Chanho if you squint
[Summary] Junho has a bad case of identity crisis.
[Notes] Pretty much an excuse for me to write Junho meta in fic form. I would love to hear your interpretations of this fascinating boy, especially if it's completely different from mine. Enjoy. ♥

( The more Junho mulled over this problem, the more he withdrew; the more he withdrew, the more the problem exacerbated. )

[Title] Animal
[Rating] NC-17
[Disclaimer] I don't own any of the 2PM boys.
[Pairings] Channuneo
[Summary] Chansung's an animal and it drives Junho crazy in more ways than one.
[Notes] Inspired by Junho and Chansung's "Back2U" fancams, which you can watch here and here. (No seriously, WATCH THEM.) In other news, I suck at titles and summaries lol. That said, enjoy. ♥

( After the next rehearsal, it was Junho who snuck into Chansung's shower stall. )

[Title] Yo Ho (A Pirate's Life For Me): Arc 4
[Rating] PG-13
[Disclaimer] I don't own any of the One Day boys.
[Pairings] Junbros, Channuneo(?), Khunyoung
[Summary] Barely a year since Junho joined The Hottest and pirates now face extinction - or renounce their ways and start their lives afresh. The latter just sounds far too tempting.
[Notes] Inspired by the Lotte Duty Free CM & Pirates of the Caribbean, then further enabled by blinkbling24.

Arcs
#1: Beginnings
#2: Normalcy is overrated
#3: Someone Else's Problem


( he landed nimbly in the middle of a group of soldiers and sprang forward like a loaded spring, cutting down three men with the blunt edge of his sword before any of them could blink. )

[Title] Tall tales
[Rating] NC-17
[Disclaimer] I don't own any of the One Day boys.
[Pairings] Chanho, Jinwoon/Kwon
[Summary] "The world was suddenly, inexplicably, crawling with demons. Thus, a new investigation force was set up to deal with this new threat -- slayers: humans trained in art of hunting demons and all forms of supernatural creatures."
[Notes] Simply put, an AU verse (isn't it always? ^^;) where demons exist in the same plane and reality as humans. Bonus teaser at the end for my pirate fic, which I'm working on as well. A-Apologies in advance for the pr0n. /o\

( It was unprecedented; two slayers and two demons, joined together to start a demon-hunting crusade. )

( Bonus teaser for Chapter 4 of Yo Ho (A Pirate's Life for Me) )