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Translation feedback post!

No flaming allowed, but constructive criticism is more than welcome! As a quick note: I would appreciate it if you gave feedback after reading my recent translations, as my translation methods have changed since my earlier works. The list of translations I've worked on can be found here. If, however, you still feel that I haven't made any improvement at all, then do let me know. Politely!

Comments are screened, anon commenting is on, IP logging is off.

Things you can feedback on:

-Translation accuracy: does the target language (English) largely match with the source language (Japanese)? have the nuances of the source language been sufficiently captured?

-Use of English: are translations accurate apart from occasional slips of grammar? do sentences have near perfect flow? do sentences sound nearly as normal as they would if spoken by a native speaker?

-Efficiency: are translations completed quickly?

-Interaction: not quite a translation issue, but an issue for fandom translators nonetheless. have I been polite in dealing with people? have I made an effort to respond to questions/comments?

CLOSED, NOV 8

ETA: All requests made before the date above still stand, I'm just... going to take a while. *sheepish* But I really don't have the time and energy to take on any new requests at the moment, s-so. Sorry folks! Hopefully someone with a more stable job and less distracted by new shiny can help you out. T^T

Requests for Japanese-English translations go here! Before making any requests, always check the translation list to see if it has already been translated.

( CURRENT UNFULFILLED REQUESTS )

( PLEASE READ )

These are all complete translations, if not completed parts of an article or video clip. I'm afraid I won't upload videos or images to accompany the script, so please don't request for them.

( Translation list )

I, think that's it.

All the junk I've ever written can be found here.

WARNING: BOYS LOVE, don't proceed if that's not something you like.

( Fic list )

( How can I not work on this one: OT5 FTW )

Notes: I've tweaked lines to make them rhyme, especially with Ookami Shounen's routine. Would like to think I've kept the nuance of the source language, but let me know if anything doesn't make sense at all. Other than that, enjoy! o/

( Arashi x Comedians Collab SP 2 )

( Arashi x Comedians Collaboration! )

Hello to everyone who has friended this journal! o/

A few things I wanted to bring up:

♥ All entries in this journal are public. Therefore, you are most welcome to friend the journal, but I will not friend you back. For more information on Friending and Security Levels on Livejournal, please go here. If you'd like to be friends and know more about me as person, then you might want to head over to my personal journal, aatash.

♥ When you send a Private Message (PM), please enable privacy options for your messages. Otherwise, any reply I send will be blocked. This has happened at least five times this month, and these journals don't have a single post for me to comment on either.

♥ In lieu of the recent subbing meme, I'm considering the idea of opening a Feedback post. If opened, this will strictly be for translations only.

♥ Finally, thank you all for showing an interest in keeping up with my fanwork. ^^

( Confessions, family talk, an unaired clip, and even a reveal on Aiba's family made by Tackey )

[Title] Four times Jun and Ohno tried to share a hobby and one time they almost did
[Rating] PG-13
[Disclaimer] Don't own any of these boys. >:
[Notes] For beckerbell, because it is her birthdayy.

( 'Is that a sunflower?' Nino asked a little too gleefully. )

Note: Uh. I'm drugged up and a bit woozy, so let me know if I've missed anything, or heard anything wrongly.

( Magic tricks, a futuristic car, a giant bonito, and Arashi reports! )

( Arashi rankings! )

Notes: It's 1am in the morning. S-So, there are probably stupid grammar errors and nonsense. Let me know if there are, and especially if I've missed anything! orz Other than that, enjoy!!

( Matsumoto is so heterosexual in his bright pink shirt and lilac cardigan )

Utaban is not out yet, therefore!

( About naughty children )

( Izumi & Kiba )

( Sho teasing Satou, Ohmiya and open zippers, Jun throwing eaten peppers into Aiba's bowl - how can you resist? )

( Let's Sing Everyone: Pa Pi Pu Pe Po )

( Heyx3: most hardworking member in 2008 & flipping XXX )

Still missing KIZUNA NO SUSHI segment. Will edit this post and add that tomorrow, passing out. orz HAVE NOT CHECKED IT uh will check it during breakfast or something ahaha. CHECKED.

( Talks about bonds and their private lives and-- )

( Poor, poor Ohno-man... )